content/blog/boolean_names.md

@@ -13,19 +13,24 @@ Boolean names should be [negatable](https://www.yourdictionary.com/negatable) an
 
 _The Elements of Style_ <sup>1</sup>, is a concise guide to writing English.  Some rules can be used as a guide for writing code as well.  For example, rule 11, "Put statements in positive form," can be applied to naming boolean variables.  In code, there is one additional requirement: the statement must be positive as well.  'enabled' is in the positive form and a positive statement.  'disabled' is in the positive form, but is a negative statement. 'notEnabled' is both in the negative form and a negative statement.
 
-In English, it is best to use enabled or disabled, and to avoid "not enabled"; they are more concise and stay in the positive form.  The extra requirement of using a positive statement for boolean names is because the negations of boolean variables have meaning as well; in writing "not disabled" is a double negative and is discouraged.  In code, '!disabled', is also a double negative, and should be avoided.
+In English, it is best to use enabled or disabled, and to avoid "not enabled"; they are more concise and stay in the positive form.  The extra requirement of using a positive statement for boolean names is because the negations of boolean variables have meaning as well; in writing, "not disabled" is a double negative and is discouraged.  In code, '!disabled', is also a double negative, and should be avoided.
 
-A boolean name should give the reader more clarity as it's scope expands.  A boolean variable that exists for the scope of an if statement may have a short name ('ok').  If this variable was in scope throughout the function, it would become meaningless.
+A boolean name should give the reader more clarity as its scope expands.  A boolean variable that exists for the scope of an if statement may have a short name ('ok').  If this variable was in scope throughout the function, it would become meaningless.
 
 ## Bad Boolean Names
 As with many things in software engineering, it is easier to find mistakes than to do something correctly the first time.  Here are some naming conventions to avoid:
-1. Names that are already a negation.  'featureTurnedOff' and 'notProd' may make sense in one use case, but becomes confusing in a larger context.  This can lead to code such as, `confA.useProd = !confB.notProd`.  This is both hard to read and ambiguous (what if there is a third environment).
+1. Names that are already a negation.  'featureTurnedOff' and 'notProd' may make sense in one use case, but becomes confusing in a larger context.  The following code is both hard to read and ambiguous (what if there is a third environment).
+```golang
 
-2. Names that are not negatable.  A name such as, 'sheets', has ambiguous meaning.  It probably has something to do with a spreadsheet, but it is the writer's responsibility to prevent the reader from needing to do an investigation.
+    confA.useProd := !confB.notProd
+
+```
+
+2. Names that are not negatable.  A name such as 'sheets' has ambiguous meaning.  It probably has something to do with a spreadsheet, but it is the writer's responsibility to prevent the reader from needing to do an investigation.
 
 3. Names that are in negative form.  These typically appear when the default use is the negative form.  For example, 'disabled' for a service typically disabled.  Keep all the names in positive form to avoid a future headache explaining what the billing system does when it's "not disabled".  Is it now enabled, or is it just not disabled?
 
-4. Overly general names.  As discussed earlier, this depends on the scope of the name.  Avoid using a name such as, 'on'.  It leaves questions in the reader's mind such as, "What thing is on?".  The exception to this is typical boolean names used across code bases; Go's 'ok' is an example of this.
+4. Overly general names.  As discussed earlier, this depends on the scope of the name.  Avoid using a name such as 'on'.  It leaves questions in the reader's mind such as "_Which_ thing is on?".  The exception to this is typical boolean names used across code bases; Go's 'ok' is an example of this.
 
 5. Negatable adjectives without context.  'bool customSize' is clear, but without the 'bool' context, the type is unclear.  Ambiguity can be removed by prefixing 'is' or 'has' ('isCustomSize').